Friday, August 17, 2007
Hospital Picnic
...for lack of a better title. Kids having fun gets exhausting. Though I admit today it was somewhat of a relief. When I read "hospital employee picnic," I was sure it would be adults standing, sitting, chowing on BBQ. Yay for family inclusion. I wish for the millions of 2 people who ever check this blog to let me know which, if either, of the second two photos you like. The joy of blogs.
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I like the first of those two. It's a bit more different than the other, ya know?
Good stuff girlie, keep it up.
I agree with Morgan.
I gotta be honest with you, my dear. Neither of those are doin it for me. It's easy to say one is better than the other, but I think you can reach higher than both of those in that situation. The second photo has potential with the layers of kids jumping and the one in the back in focus, but its too loose to make the impact it needs. I'm not sure why the first one is composed the way it is. The wierdness of it doesn't contribute to the story you intended it to tell. Why is there a big giant leg in the foreground? How does it relate to the scene and the girl in the background? I'm not getting the message. The top photo of the girl in the tank is cool. But I would have liked to see more emphasis on the tank girl, or something more active/present on the other 2/3 of the frame for balance. Nice gestures you caught, though. Focus more on the gestures than on the funky composition.
I agree with Tim and Morgan. My vote goes for the first one. It's a different way of seeing bouncing bodies..
Hi Celia!!! I love the first picture with the girl in the tank. I like the frame the way it is with the little girl doing her thing and then this weird creature in the water.
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